my first two gum prints

[ryberg <cryberg@comcast.net>]

Folks,
    You may see my first two gum prints at 
http://home.comcast.net/~cryberg/index.html

   This is a pretty unsophisticated site--no flash, no java, just cookbook 
html and hopfully fairly quick to load.
   I would appreciate any advice, but especially what to do about the total 
lack of texture in the woman's hat and sleeve.  Do you think my curves need 
adjusting?  Should I go back to the orginal, burn in the hat and reprint the 
negatives?.
   By the way, this is three color, unsized Fabriano Aristico.
Thanks,
Charles   Portland OR